Wandering Thoughts: Rose Petal

Wednesday, February 28, 2007

Rose Petal

Rose petal,
Cherry
Blossom of death on the mountain,
Fire-livid in my unreality
Figures seen,
Possibly human,
Alike
In the black and white
Of a thermal sight

2 comments:

HollyB said...: I like your imagery and your rhyme scheme. Not the everyday Iambic Pentameter.; March 3, 2007 at 3:56 AM
HollyB said...: Oh, and thanks for the link, I'll be posting one shortly for this site on my page.; March 3, 2007 at 3:57 AM